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2018-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Q: What type of conflicts do you think are typical between parents and children that are different from the conflicts between children and adults in general? ' A: When it comes to cleaning room, I can say that it is most typical conflict I thought, even though children become adult. It normally happen to me. I'm 23 years old. My parents have started nitpick when I was in elementary school. Also they said like that "H will be changed while she are growing up," But never I do. Standard about living life is different parents and children, so It is not the prob of the age.

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When it comes to cleaning room, I can say that it is most typical conflict I thought, even though children become adult. It normally happen to me. I\'m 23 years old. My parents have started nitpick when I was in elementary school. Also they said like that \"H will be changed while she are growing up,\" But never I do. Standard about living life is different parents and children, so It is not the prob of the age.

When it comes to cleaning the room, I can say that it is the most typical conflict between parents and children, even though children become adults. It normally happens to me. I\'m 23 years old, and my parents have started nitpick when I was an elementary school student. They also said that \"She will change as she grows up.\" But I never did. Parents and children have a different standard about living their lives, and it\'s not about regardless of their age.

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