6-14th Homework

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What is the first thing that you determine when you make a plan for a trip?

>> CORRECT!

OR >> What is the first thing that you need to know when you come up with a plan for a trip?
I suppose that the location was already determined.

>> I suppose the location should be determined.

If the location was already determined, you would book an airplane previously.

>> If the location is already determined, you would book a flight early.

According to my experience, if you want to book right time on your schedule, I recommend you to book the airplane at least 6 months before.

>> According to my experience, if you want to book on time with your schedule, you should book for a flight at least 6 months before.
If not, you would pay more.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If not, you would have to pay more.
Last two weeks ago, I decided to go to a hot spring instantly.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Two weeks ago, I decided to go to a hot spring instantly.
We wanted to book the hotel that was close, and fortunately we could do it even with paying less.

>> We wanted to book the hotel that was close and fortunately we did it even with paying less.
It was the domestic trip, but if it is abroad, it would be impossible to be satisfied with our demands.

>> [Do you mean]: It was a domestic trip, but if it was abroad, it would be impossible to meet all of our demands.

Before staring the trip, we usually plan routes for seeing and having something around.

>> Before starting the trip, we usually plan the routes for sight seeing and eating.
I think the schedule is very important in abroad.

>> I think the schedule is very important abroad.
It\'s because we could not easy to get the chance in our busy life lacking money.

>> It\'s because we could not easily get the chance to travel in our busy life while lacking money.
So, many people want to use their time seamlessly.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why many people want to use their time wisely.
But I don\'t well to set up the schedule whenever I set up the schedule.

>> [Do you mean]: But I am not good at setting up the schedule whenever I do it.