6.15 H.W !
학생이 쓴 원문
Composition: Answer the following question briefly:
Are there any customs in your country visitors might find strange?
What are these?
I remember that i watched TV program several days ago. The TV program named is \'Is this your first time in korea?\' and as in name content is about a foreign tourist plane traveling to Korea.
The case in Korea, at the most of restaurants the clerk give to a customer added bills whenever a customer order to menu in restaurant for check the order list right away.
Of course to koreans it is a natural custom. But foreign tourist in TV program understood it differently as it meant that you should eat and leave soon.
So i\'m surprised by their reaction.
I was told that you are sick last friday!
So i was very worried and sad T.T
Are you okay now???
I hope you get well!!
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
Thank you for finding time to do your homework. Teacher Elisha is back to work today.
~T. Lynn
I remember that i watched TV program several days ago.
>> I remember I watched a TV program several days ago.
The TV program named is \'Is this your first time in korea?\' and as in name content is about a foreign tourist plane traveling to Korea.
>> The TV program is called \'Is this your first time in Korea?\' and as the title suggest it is about foreign tourist traveling to Korea.
The case in Korea, at the most of restaurants the clerk give to a customer added bills whenever a customer order to menu in restaurant for check the order list right away.
>> In most Korean restaurants, the clerk gives to a customer added bill whenever a customer order a menu in the order list right away.
Of course to Koreans it is a natural custom.
>> correct!
But foreign tourist in TV program understood it differently as it meant that you should eat and leave soon.
>> But the foreign tourist on the TV program understood it differently. He thought it meant that you should eat and leave soon.
So i\'m surprised by their reaction.
>> So I was surprised by their reaction.
Thank you for finding time to do your homework. Teacher Elisha is back to work today.
~T. Lynn
I remember that i watched TV program several days ago.
>> I remember I watched a TV program several days ago.
The TV program named is \'Is this your first time in korea?\' and as in name content is about a foreign tourist plane traveling to Korea.
>> The TV program is called \'Is this your first time in Korea?\' and as the title suggest it is about foreign tourist traveling to Korea.
The case in Korea, at the most of restaurants the clerk give to a customer added bills whenever a customer order to menu in restaurant for check the order list right away.
>> In most Korean restaurants, the clerk gives to a customer added bill whenever a customer order a menu in the order list right away.
Of course to Koreans it is a natural custom.
>> correct!
But foreign tourist in TV program understood it differently as it meant that you should eat and leave soon.
>> But the foreign tourist on the TV program understood it differently. He thought it meant that you should eat and leave soon.
So i\'m surprised by their reaction.
>> So I was surprised by their reaction.
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