6.15 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good evening!
Which do you think is more important, our present or our future? Why?
Of course, I think that health is the most important thing for our present and our future. Because if we lose our health, we can't get chances for everything. So I try to exercise every day. Please be careful, Kelly!
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, MR. [이름]!
Great job for today. Keep up the great job! Thank you for the concern. I will keep that in mind. Take care!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good evening!>> Correct.Which do you think is more important, our present or our future? Why?Of course, I think that health is the most important thing for our present and our future.
>> Correct.
Because if we lose our health, we can\'t get chances for everything.
>> Correct.
>> or: If we are not healthy, we can\'t get any chance for everything.
So I try to exercise every day.
>> Correct.
Please be careful, Kelly!>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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