6.15 Homework

2015-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good evening! Which do you think is more important, our present or our future? Why? Of course, I think that health is the most important thing for our present and our future. Because if we lose our health, we can't get chances for everything. So I try to exercise every day. Please be careful, Kelly! Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, MR. [이름]! Great job for today. Keep up the great job! Thank you for the concern. I will keep that in mind. Take care! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good evening!>> Correct.Which do you think is more important, our present or our future? Why?Of course, I think that health is the most important thing for our present and our future. >> Correct. Because if we lose our health, we can\'t get chances for everything. >> Correct. >> or: If we are not healthy, we can\'t get any chance for everything. So I try to exercise every day. >> Correct. Please be careful, Kelly!>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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