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[Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually.]
This is main trouble for undergraduate students in common university.
>>> This is the main trouble for undergraduate students in some universities.
Many professor give a homework to students as group project.
>>> Many professors give a group project to students.
If all students have passion, the results can be better than that from individuals.
>>> If all students are passionate, the result can be better that of individual projects.
However, in the many cases, some of the member just have a passion and want to do very well.
>>> However, in many cases, some don\'t want to cooperate or they don\'t want to do their best.
In that case, just few students perform the project.
>>> In that case, only few members work on the project.
But, professor give a score for the group.
>>> But the professor gives a score as a group.
This is unfair.
>>> Correct!
I think this is same in a company and further society.
>>> I think this is same in companies and other sectors.
So, I think it\'s better to make a group voluntarily, and do the best.
>>> So, it\'s better to not to force students to do group projects.
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