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2018-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually.] This is main trouble for undergraduate students in common university. Many professor give a homework to students as group project. If all students have passion, the results can be better than that from individuals. However, in the many cases, some of the member just have a passion and want to do very well. In that case, just few students perform the project. But, professor give a score for the group. This is unfair. I think this is same in a company and further society. So, I think it's better to make a group voluntarily, and do the best.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

I hope your day is going well.

Thanks for doing this. See you on Monday.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


[Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solutions that if they were to try to solve the problem individually.]

This is main trouble for undergraduate students in common university. 

>>> This is the main trouble for undergraduate students in some universities.
 Many professor give a homework to students as group project.

>>> Many professors give a group project to students.
 If all students have passion, the results can be better than that from individuals.

>>> If all students are passionate, the result can be better that of individual projects.
 However, in the many cases, some of the member just have a passion and want to do very well.

>>> However, in many cases, some don\'t want to cooperate or they don\'t want to do their best.
 In that case, just few students perform the project.

>>> In that case, only few members work on the project.
 But, professor give a score for the group. 

>>> But the professor gives a score as a group.
 This is unfair. 

>>> Correct!
 I think this is same in a company and further society. 

>>> I think this is same in companies and other sectors.
 So, I think it\'s better to make a group voluntarily, and do the best.

>>> So, it\'s better to not to force students to do group projects.

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