6-15th Homework

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It will start the vacation of rural new year from tomorrow.

>>The vacation for Lunar New Year will start tomorrow.

Although Korea is a small country, most Koreans live in Seoul and it\'s about a quarter of population.

>>Although Korea is a small country, most Koreans live in Seoul which covers a quarter of the population.

I think It\'s so crazy.

>>I think it\'s crazy.

Many people who live in Seoul want to leave away but they cannot do that right now.

>>Many people who live in Seoul want to leave the place but they cannot do that right now.

There are no appropriate jobs In the other places except for Seoul.

>>There are no appropriate jobs in other places except in Seoul.

Before moving into current city, I lived in Seoul.

>>Before moving to the current city where I\'m living right now, I lived in Seoul.

At that time, my commute time was about a hour and 30 minutes just one side.

>>At that time, I commute for an hour and 30 minutes for one way.

So, I didn\'t do anything that I want to do and I\'m always tired.

>>So, I was not able to do the things that I wanted and I was always tired.

I\'m not sure about why people in Seoul sleep so much late.

>>I don\'t know the reason why people in Seoul always sleep late.

I slept so much late, too.

>>I slept late, too.

I think they don\'t want to waste their time over sleeping.

>>I think they didn\'t want to waste their time sleeping.

And they always have to do a lot of workloads so that they are always busy and they want to get personal time in the evening.

>>They always had a lot of things to do so they were always busy and they wanted to have their personal time in the evening.
 After moving into current city, I have not slept so much late.

>>After moving here, I didn\'t sleep late.

If there is a special reason, I would sleep late.

>>If there is something that I need to do, I would sleep late.

The main contents that I write in the composition board is not this.

>>The main content of the composition that I wrote was not this.