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That would, definitely, be a super car. My dream car is the Lamborghini Aventador.
The fact that I own it means that I\'ve already made a huge success. I\'ve always dreamt of myself driving that super car through the main gate of the apartment complex where I live, watching all of the residents that look surprised to see my car. Everyone would have imagined that kind of scene at least one time in his life.
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Hi U [이름]!
Yes, we should invest our money into important things and we have to consider a lot of things in terms of way of living.
PS: That\'s amazing! You indeed are a successful person since you have a super car. Hahaha!
That would, definitely, be a super car.
>> That would be definitely a super car.
My dream car is the Lamborghini Aventador.
>> CORRECT
The fact that I own it means that I\'ve already made a huge success.
>> CORRECT
I\'ve always dreamt of myself driving that super car through the main gate of the apartment complex where I live, watching all of the residents that look surprised to see my car.
>> CORRECT
Everyone would have imagined that kind of scene at least one time in his life.
>> CORRECT
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