6/16 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I was born in 1997 about 25 years ago
and i\'m from daegu in korea
I have never left daegu
2. my major is trade science
it is just learning the knowledge of trade
this includes management, economics,
finance and so on.
3. I don\'t know about the job interests yet
well the other things is taking pictures.
especially when I go on a trip
I like to take pictures of the scenery
강사 첨삭
Good job, [이름]! I think you can construct sentences with clear thoughts. May you keep up the good work!-Faith-
1. I was born in 1997 about 25 years ago and i\'m from daegu in korea>> 1. I was born in 1997, about 25 years ago and I\'m from Daegu, Korea.
I have never left daegu
I have never left daegu
>> I have never left Daegu since birth.
2. my major is trade science
2. my major is trade science
>> 2. My major is trade science.
it is just learning the knowledge of trade
it is just learning the knowledge of trade
>> It is just learning the knowledge of trade.
this includes management, economics, finance and so on.
this includes management, economics, finance and so on.
>> This includes management, economics, finance and so on.
3. I don\'t know about the job interests yet
3. I don\'t know about the job interests yet
>> I don\'t know about my job interests yet.
well the other things is taking pictures. especially when I go on a trip I like to take pictures of the scenery
well the other things is taking pictures. especially when I go on a trip I like to take pictures of the scenery
>> Well, one thing is taking pictures especially when I go on a trip, I like to take pictures of beautiful sceneries.
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