6.16 Homework

2015-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! Happy Tuesday to you! 1) My wife really did up the new bedroom. Before it was kind of ugly, but now it's beautiful! 2) When you go camping in the woods you have to do without electricity. 3) Sally started her own business and now makes a lot of money. She has really done well for herself. 4) My company did away with a lot of paperwork when they realized it wasn't helpful for business. 5)He's been pretty lazy. A little exercise will do him good. He'll feel a lot better later. Hve a nice day!

강사 첨삭

Good morning MR. [이름]! You have done a very great job here again. I am happy with your output. Continue giving your best! Have a wonderful day! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! Happy Tuesday to you!>> Correct.1) My wife really did up the new bedroom. Before it was kind of ugly, but now it\'s beautiful! >> Correct.2) When you go camping in the woods you have to do without electricity. >> Correct.3) Sally started her own business and now makes a lot of money. She has really done well for herself. >> Correct.4) My company did away with a lot of paperwork when they realized it wasn\'t helpful for business. >> Correct.5)He\'s been pretty lazy. A little exercise will do him good. He\'ll feel a lot better later. >> Correct.Hve a nice day! >> Correct.  

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