6-16th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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This composition would be a first thing after being changed a teacher.
>>This
composition is the first thing that I would do after I changed my teacher.
I would like to say about the composition board before
writing some sentences.
>correct
>> I would
like to say something about the composition board before writing my homework.
Actually, I don\'t care about the homework in the evaluation
page.
>correct
For about 2 years, I followed the homework after ending the
class and I felt that the contents of the homework was same sometimes.
>>For
about 2 years, I did my homework at the end of the class and I noticed that the
contents were same sometimes.
So, I tried to make the sentences not related with the
homework in the evaluation page.
>correct
>>So
I tried to make other sentences with different topics.
Being changed the teacher, I was nervous and I\'m still
uncomfortable.
>>I
was nervous and I still feel uncomfortable because I changed my teacher.
I have studied English through a phone for about 2 years with
one teacher who doesn\'t teach me any more.
>>I
have studied English through the phone for about 2 years with one teacher who
is not teaching anymore.
So I had been familiar with the previous teacher\'s speaking
speed and pronunciation.
>correct
Actually, I would like to talk about anything rather than the
book.
>correct
>>Actually,
I would like to have free talking classes rather than using books from the
website.
Therefore, I have studied for a long time but the number of
the page that I have studied is not so many.
>correct
In the middle I considered about changing into another
teacher, I couldn\'t do that.
>>In the end, I considered changing my teacher.
>>In the end, I considered having a new teacher.
It wasn\'t for me to dissatisfied to the teacher.
>>I was satisfied with the teacher.
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