6/17 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I belive in ghosts.
I heard that some people show them.
And there are many movies and dramas about ghosts.
In korea, there are shamans and sometimes I had been go to see them when I had a serious trouble.^^
But I don't like to belive in ghosts. I really scary them.
If ghosts really exists, I want to that there is only good ghosts as like Swayze, Patrick. Do you know the movie 'Ghost'?
Jessie, do you belive in ghosts?
In today's picture, I looked like a bedroom because my printing book is only black and white. ^^
What I was saying to you that I'd like to have a safe in golds.
I will have practice the pronounciation 'safe'.
Take care too~~
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you for expressing your belief.
Anyway, I don\'t believe in ghosts because I haven\'t seen one. ^^,
I haven\'t watched the movie \"Ghosts\", but I will try to look for it.
Well then, see you later Ms. [이름]! Let\'s talk more about this later. ^^,
~T. Jessie~
I belive in ghosts.
>> Correct!I heard that some people show them.
>> I heard that some people can see them.And there are many movies and dramas about ghosts.
>> Correct!In korea, there are shamans and sometimes I had been go to see them when I had a serious trouble.^^
>> In Korea, there are shamans and there were times when I had to meet them when I had serious trouble.But I don\'t like to belive in ghosts.
>> Correct!
I really scary them.
>> I am really scared of them.If ghosts really exists, I want to that there is only good ghosts as like Swayze, Patrick.
>> If ghosts really exists, I hope that there is only one good ghost like Swayze, Patrick.
Do you know the movie \'Ghost\'?
>> Correct!Jessie, do you belive in ghosts?>> Correct!In today\'s picture, I looked like a bedroom because my printing book is only black and white. ^^
>> Today\'s picture looked like a bedroom because my printed book is black and white.What I was saying to you that I\'d like to have a safe in golds.
>> What I was saying to you is that I\'d like to have a safe in golds.I will have practice the pronounciation \'safe\'.>> I have to practice pronouncing the word \"safe\"Take care too~~ >> Correct!
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