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2014-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I belive in ghosts. I heard that some people show them. And there are many movies and dramas about ghosts. In korea, there are shamans and sometimes I had been go to see them when I had a serious trouble.^^ But I don't like to belive in ghosts. I really scary them. If ghosts really exists, I want to that there is only good ghosts as like Swayze, Patrick. Do you know the movie 'Ghost'? Jessie, do you belive in ghosts? In today's picture, I looked like a bedroom because my printing book is only black and white. ^^ What I was saying to you that I'd like to have a safe in golds. I will have practice the pronounciation 'safe'. Take care too~~

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for expressing your belief. Anyway, I don\'t believe in ghosts because I haven\'t seen one. ^^, I haven\'t watched the movie \"Ghosts\", but I will try to look for it. Well then, see you later Ms. [이름]! Let\'s talk more about this later. ^^, ~T. Jessie~ I belive in ghosts. >> Correct!I heard that some people show them. >> I heard that some people can see them.And there are many movies and dramas about ghosts. >> Correct!In korea, there are shamans and sometimes I had been go to see them when I had a serious trouble.^^ >> In Korea, there are shamans and there were times when I had to meet them when I had serious trouble.But I don\'t like to belive in ghosts. >> Correct! I really scary them. >> I am really scared of them.If ghosts really exists, I want to that there is only good ghosts as like Swayze, Patrick. >> If ghosts really exists, I hope that there is only one good ghost like Swayze, Patrick. Do you know the movie \'Ghost\'? >> Correct!Jessie, do you belive in ghosts?>> Correct!In today\'s picture, I looked like a bedroom because my printing book is only black and white. ^^ >> Today\'s picture looked like a bedroom because my printed book is black and white.What I was saying to you that I\'d like to have a safe in golds. >> What I was saying to you is that I\'d like to have a safe in golds.I will have practice the pronounciation \'safe\'.>> I have to practice pronouncing the word \"safe\"Take care too~~ >> Correct!

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