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2014-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: Do you believe in ghosts? Why or why not? I want to believe that there are ghosts in some where. But my head says, "there in no ghost anywhere." The exist of ghosts has not proven yet. But if there is no ghost, I may feel sad and lonly. Because I can't hope to meet someone who I loved again. So I want to belive in ghosts.

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Hello there! Thank you for expressing your opinion about this. Indeed, it is not yet proven. Anyway, please go over the corrections I made. Have an enjoyable day! ~T. Jessie~ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY: Do you believe in ghosts? Why or why not?I want to believe that there are ghosts in some where. >> I want to believe that there are ghosts somewhere.But my head says, \"there in no ghost anywhere.\" >> But my head says, \"There are no ghosts anywhere.\"The exist of ghosts has not proven yet. >> The existence of ghost is not yet proven.But if there is no ghost, I may feel sad and lonly. >> Correct!Because I can\'t hope to meet someone who I loved again. >> Correct!So I want to belive in ghosts. >> Correct!

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