6.17 Homework

Hi there! Good afternoon! What are the advantages and disadvantages of internet to the people? First of all, the most advantage of internet to the people is to share a lot of informations. Today, people can buy and sell the things on the internet. It is getting more convenient to live. The internet makes us to be globalized, but there are disadvantages of internet to the people. I think that one of disadvantages of internet is data spill. I know that it is serious to people nowadays. Thank you

Hi there Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Please check my corrections. Take care! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good afternoon!>> Correct.What are the advantages and disadvantages of internet to the people?First of all, the most advantage of internet to the people is to share a lot of informations. >> First of all, the biggest advantage of internet to the people is to share a lot of information.  Today, people can buy and sell the things on the internet. >> Today, people can buy and sell things on the internet. It is getting more convenient to live. >> Life is getting more convenient. The internet makes us to be globalized, but there are disadvantages of internet to the people. >> The internet makes everything globalized, but there are disadvantages of internet to the people. I think that one of disadvantages of internet is data spill. >> Correct. I know that it is serious to people nowadays.>> Correct.>> I know that it is a serious issue to people nowadays.Thank you~ >> Correct.