6/17 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Your passion will help you improve in no time [이름]!
Just don\'t get tired practicing.
See you when you get back.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
[In not more than ten sentences, describe something you’re passionate about. How do you learn more about it?]
I have an interests about the learning English.
>>> I am interested in learning English.
>>> OR: I have interest in learning English.
I have felt about the importance of conversation in international meeting and conference.
>>> I have felt the important of being able to handle conversations in international meetings and conferences.
So, If I can, I want to improve my English skill by myself.
>>> Correct! [skills]
But, I know it\'s not can be one day.
>>> But I know I won\'t be able to do it in just one day.
I have to just keep going to study English.
>>> I have to keep studying English.
I said it\'s like marathon.
>>> Correct!
If I have a time, I open the youtube in my smartphone.
>>> When I have time, I open YouTube in my smartphone.
I can find English channel easily such as song, video, or movie.
>>> I can find English channels easily where I can enjoy songs, movies and other videos.
I think this is relatively not boring way to learn English.
>>> Correct!
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