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2018-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

[In not more than ten sentences, describe something you’re passionate about. How do you learn more about it?] I have an interests about the learning English. I have felt about the importance of conversation in international meeting and conference. So, If I can, I want to improve my English skill by myself. But, I know it's not can be one day. I have to just keep going to study English. I said it's like marathon. If I have a time, I open the youtube in my smartphone. I can find English channel easily such as song, video, or movie. I think this is relatively not boring way to learn English.

강사 첨삭

Your passion will help you improve in no time [이름]!
Just don\'t get tired practicing.

See you when you get back.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


[In not more than ten sentences, describe something you’re passionate about. How do you learn more about it?]

I have an interests about the learning English. 

>>> I am interested in learning English.

>>> OR: I have interest in learning English.
 I have felt about the importance of conversation in international meeting and conference.

>>> I have felt the important of being able to handle conversations in international meetings and conferences.  
 So, If I can, I want to improve my English skill by myself. 

>>> Correct! [skills]
 But, I know it\'s not can be one day. 

>>> But I know I won\'t be able to do it in just one day.
 I have to just keep going to study English. 

>>> I have to keep studying English.
 I said it\'s like marathon. 

>>> Correct! 
 If I have a time, I open the youtube in my smartphone.

>>> When I have time, I open YouTube in my smartphone.
 I can find English channel easily such as song, video, or movie.

>>> I can find English channels easily where I can enjoy songs, movies and other videos.
 I think this is relatively not boring way to learn English.

>>> Correct!


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