6/18 Essey homework

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A:Nowadays lots of modern people enjoy convenience food. This phenomenon has happened since people find more easy way to have their meals, has also accompanied with drawbacks.
Speaking of advantages. of course convenience food make us have our meals more easily at all. We can spend time for more precious working by reducing meal time.
Otherwise, We see the side effect of those foods. That is we have missed what our body really want. It is related with healthiness. As some doctors said on chart, the late of adult-disease has increased once convenience foods have gotten higher than before. It means we also need to care our body.
In short, convenience food has became a trend for modern people but still has brought high late of disease.

Nowadays lots of modern people enjoy convenience food. This phenomenon has happened since people find more easy way to have their meals, has also accompanied with drawbacks.
Speaking of advantages. of course convenience food make us have our meals easily. We can spend time for more precious/ important work by reducing our meal time.

Otherwise, We see the side effects of those foods. That is we have missed what our body really wants. It is related with healthiness. As some doctors said on chart, the late of adult-disease has increased once convenience foods consumption has gotten higher than before. It means we also need to care our body. In short, convenience food has became a trend for modern people but still has brought high late of disease.