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2018-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework for the day: How do you usually cope with stress? Explain your answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences. I usually have tend to give strong stress in many ways easily. So, whenever got me stress, i meet my friends or boyfriend and we are chatt about problem for solve my stress. Or i used to spend time staying home alone. I make my favorite food only for me and i eat a delicious food and i watch the TV or movie that i\'ve been want to watched thing.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! It\'s a great day and I want you to have a blessed one~! By the way, thanks for doing your homework. Consider the corrections below and put them into applications for better learning. Thank you~! Have a nice day~! ^^

>>> TEACHER ELISHA

I usually have tend to give strong stress in many ways easily.

>>>I usually have tend to have effective stress relievers in many ways easily.
So, whenever got me stress, i meet my friends or boyfriend and we are chatt about problem for solve my stress.

>>>So, whenever I got stressed,  I meet my friends or boyfriend and we chat about my problem to relieve my stress.
Or i used to spend time staying home alone.

>>> Or, I used to spend time alone at home.
I make my favorite food only for me and i eat a delicious food and i watch the TV or movie that i\'ve been want to watched thing.

>>>I make my favorite food for myself, I eat a delicious food, watch TV or a movie that I\'ve been wanting to watch.

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