6/18 homework

2014-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: If you had to choose to live with someone who truly loves you but you don't love him back or to live alone for a rest of your life loving someone that doesn't love you what, would you choose? Usually, I prefer to meet someone who I love, more than who loves me In real situations. Because I have some chances to turn his mind to loves me. (The probability is not 0%, so I can hope a happy ending.) However, in an extreme situation like the question, I can't make someone who dosen't love me to loves me. So I will choose a man who loves me. And if someone loves me 'truly', I guess my mind will change love him. I didn't do my homework yesterday. So I wrote it shortly. Have a nice day :)

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Hi there [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework even if it\'s late. I appreciate your effort. ^^, Anyway, see you tomorrow! I hope you\'ll have time to go over the corrections. Take care! ~T. Jessie~ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY: If you had to choose to live with someone who truly loves you but you don\'t love him back or to live alone for a rest of your life loving someone that doesn\'t love you what, would you choose?Usually, I prefer to meet someone who I love, more than who loves me In real situations. >> Usually, I prefer to meet someone who I love more than someone who loves me. OR>> Realistically, I prefer to meet someone who I love more than someone who loves me.Because I have some chances to turn his mind to loves me. >> Because I can have a chance to make him love me.(The probability is not 0%, so I can hope a happy ending.) >> (The probability is not 0%, so I can hope for a happy ending.)However, in an extreme situation like the question, I can\'t make someone who dosen\'t love me to loves me. >> However, in an extreme situation like the question, I can\'t make someone who doesn\'t love me love me. So I will choose a man who loves me. >> Correct!And if someone loves me \'truly\', I guess my mind will change love him.>> And if someone truly loves me, I might love him too in the future.I didn\'t do my homework yesterday. >> Correct!So I wrote it shortly.>> Correct! Have a nice day :) >> Correct!

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