6. 18 Homework
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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages/disadvantages of this trend?
The advantages can be shrinking of our time in making food and we can eat someting during very busy days.
The disadvatages can be eatting unhealthy food and we can be fat.
I don't like to eat convenience foods because that foods have many unhealty things.
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The advantages can be shrinking of our time in making food and we can eat someting during very busy days.
The disadvatages can be eatting unhealthy food and we can be fat.
I don\'t like to eat convenience foods because that foods have many unhealty things.
One of the advantages of this trend is we can eat something during our busy days.
But the disadvantage is eating unhealthy food, often times it could make us fat due to the food\'s preservative, calories etc.
I don\'t like eating convenience foods because it contain unhealthy ingredients.
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