6,18th homework

2014-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

I have eaten an apple ot some tomatoes everymorning. I don't eat a lot late at night and wolk a lot.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for sending your composition.
Well, it is good to know that you are keeping your body healthy by doing the things that you mentioned.
And even if you have a stressful day everyday, just keep doing what you are doing and make yourself fit.
I\'ll see you later!
May you have a great Thursday morning!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

I have eaten an apple ot some tomatoes everymorning.
>> I am eating some apples and tomatoes every morning.
>> or: I eat some apples and tomatoes every morning.
I don\'t eat a lot late at night and wolk a lot.

>> I don\'t eat a lot at night and I walk a lot.
>> or: I am not eating a lot at night and I am walking a lot.

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