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I am most influenced by my parents. Parents are who I see since the beginning of my life to the present. They affected me from simple habits like saying thank you before eating a meal to my political ideas. But my parents and I are different person, so I am not completely alike to them. Though it is true that I am most affected by my parents, I have different thoughts and values from my parents. I used to think that everything my parents say is true. However as I grew, I realized that their thoughts are also affected by their own values and experiences. I have grown to know that difference does not mean wrongness. Thus nowadays, I am trying to see the bigger world and find out how my opinion can differ from their\'s. That way, I\'ll be able to discover what my values that isn\'t followed to others are.
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Hi [이름]. Awesome work. Keep it up!
- T. Gabby :)
I am most influenced by my parents.
>> Correct.
Parents are who I see since the beginning of my life to the present.
>> My parents whom I\'m with since I was born up to now.
They affected me from simple habits like saying thank you before eating a meal to my political ideas.
>> Correct.
But my parents and I are different person, so I am not completely alike to them.
>> But my parents and I are different people, so I am completely different from them.
Though it is true that I am most affected by my parents,
>> Correct.
I have different thoughts and values from my parents.
>> Correct.
I used to think that everything my parents say is true.
>> I used to think that everything that my parents say are true.
However as I grew, I realized that their thoughts are also affected by their own values and experiences.
>> Correct.
I have grown to know that difference does not mean wrongness.
>> I grew knowing that those differences mean it\'s all wrong.
Thus nowadays, I am trying to see the bigger world and find out how my opinion can differ from their\'s.
>> Thus nowadays, I am trying to see the bigger world and finding out how my opinion can differ from their\'s.
That way, I\'ll be able to discover what my values that isn\'t followed to others are.
>> That way, I\'ll be able to discover my own set of values.
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