6-1st Homework

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In my case, the longest flying time was 11 hours to Europe.

>>> In my case, it took me 11 hours to go to Europe. 
I departed Europe in the middle of night, so I arrive at there in the morning.

>>> I departed in Europe in the middle of the night so I arrived there in the morning.
 During flying, I just slept until arriving and it seemed to be natural.

>>> During the flight, I just slept until we arrived. It seemed natural.

So, I didn\'t feel the jet-lag anymore.

>>> I didn\'t feel any jet-lag.
However, when I left Europe and then I arrived at Korea, I seriously felt the jet-lag.

>>> However, when I arrived in Korea, I feel very tired.
During 1 week, I had experienced some symptom that was a snooze and a fatigue.

>>> During that week, I experienced some symptoms such as snooze and fatigue.
While working time, I didn\'t do anything else.

>>> When I\'m at work, I can\'t do anything else.
 I just wanted to sleep as it was time to sleep in Europe.

>>> I just wanted to sleep like the time I was in Europe.
 If you heard it, you would imagine that I seemed to stay at there for a long time.

>>> If you heard about it, the symptoms will linger for quite sometime.
Actually, my visit time was just only 2 weeks.

>>> Actually, I only stayed in Europe for two weeks.
 The journey to Europe was very exciting and interesting.

>>> My journey/visit to Europe was very exciting and interesting.
 There are many different things with Korea.

>>> It is different from Korea.
 The first thing that I think now is the color of the roof.

>>> The first thing that I notice there was the color of their roof.
 The color of roof is orange and the flat or apartments is very rare.

>>> It is orange and flats/apartments are not common.