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2016-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

C.Questions 1. Yes, I do. I always spend enjoyable time with my family on the weekend but I usually spend catching up on sleep. I really like this time. 2. I prefer to spend time with my family because my family is my paradise and my life. 3. I like watching TV but I can't watch TV weekdays because I am very busy. So weekend time of watching TV is my precious time. 4. I usually stay at home. I am lazy woman but sometimes I have appointment with my family or my friend. So sometimes I used to plan my weekend. 5. I usually go to the theater with my family during the weekends and than we go to the department store. We like the window shopping.

강사 첨삭

C.Questions
1. Yes, I do.
I always spend enjoyable time with my family on the weekend but I usually spend catching up on sleep.

>> Yes, I do. I always spend enjoyable time with my family on the weekend but I usually spend it catching up on my sleep.

>> or: Yes, I do. I always enjoy spending my time with my family on the weekend but I usually spend it catching up on my sleep

I really like this time.

>> correct!

 2. I prefer to spend time with my family because my family is my paradise and my life.

>> correct! 
 3. I like watching TV but I can\'t watch TV weekdays because I am very busy.

>>  I like watching TV but I can\'t watch TV during the weekdays because I am very busy.

>> or: I like to watch but I cannot do it during the weekdays because I am very busy.
 So weekend time of watching TV is my precious time.

>> So my time to watch TV during the weekend is very precious.
 4. I usually stay at home. I am lazy woman but sometimes I have appointment with my family or my friend.

>>  I usually stay at home. I am a lazy woman but sometimes, I have appointment with my family or friends.
 So sometimes I used to plan my weekend.

>> correct!
 5. I usually go to the theater with my family during the weekends and than we go to the department store. 

>>  I usually go to the theater with my family during the weekends and then, we go to the department store.

>> or: I usually go to the theater  and to the department store with my family during the weekend.
 We like the window shopping.

>> We like window shopping.

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