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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
C.Questions
1. Yes, I do. I always spend enjoyable time with my family on the weekend but I usually spend catching up on sleep.
>> Yes, I do. I always spend enjoyable time with my family on the weekend but I usually spend it catching up on my sleep.
>> or: Yes, I do. I always enjoy spending my time with my family on the weekend but I usually spend it catching up on my sleep
I really like this time.
>> correct!
2. I prefer to spend time with my family because my family is my paradise and my life.
>> correct!
3. I like watching TV but I can\'t watch TV weekdays because I am very busy.
>> I like watching TV but I can\'t watch TV during the weekdays because I am very busy.
>> or: I like to watch but I cannot do it during the weekdays because I am very busy.
So weekend time of watching TV is my precious time.
>> So my time to watch TV during the weekend is very precious.
4. I usually stay at home. I am lazy woman but sometimes I have appointment with my family or my friend.
>> I usually stay at home. I am a lazy woman but sometimes, I have appointment with my family or friends.
So sometimes I used to plan my weekend.
>> correct!
5. I usually go to the theater with my family during the weekends and than we go to the department store.
>> I usually go to the theater with my family during the weekends and then, we go to the department store.
>> or: I usually go to the theater and to the department store with my family during the weekend.
We like the window shopping.
>> We like window shopping.
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