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2020-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

학생이 쓴 원문

I had no great hardships and pains in my life during the student period. Although my parents didn\'t earn a lot of money, they love so much and grew up very well their children with sacrifice. My score pretty good at middle and high schools, so I passed university at once. I got a good score in undergraduate school and I smoothly go on to the next stage of my education for master and doctor courses. My hardships were started after getting Ph.D. I didn\'t know how difficult getting a favorite job. I applied to many research institutes and universities and I failed a lot. And it\'s ongoing. I realized that there is a lot of smarter guys than I or I didn\'t have luck. When I thought I did my best and so I couldn\'t anything more, all of my energy is exhausted. It\'s a lot of pain to endure this situation, but I think this is probably the time I\'m given to grow and upgrade myself for a better future. I\'m learning every moment from these difficulties, and eventually, I\'ll get over them.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thanks for this insightful story. Despite the challenges and difficulties you are going through this time, I know you will do well. This might just be the testing period for you to develop your character and be better. Just do your best because eventually, your opportunity will come knocking on your door. Cheer up!
-Rachel
I had no great hardships and pains in my life during the student period.
>> I haven\'t experienced hardships and pain when I was a student. 
Although my parents didn\'t earn a lot of money, they love so much and grew up very well their children with sacrifice.
>> Although my parents didn\'t earn a lot of money, they love us so much and raised us well through their sacrifice. 
My score pretty good at middle and high schools, so I passed university at once.
>> My grade were pretty good in middle and high schools, so I passed the university entrance exams at once. 
I got a good score in undergraduate school and I smoothly go on to the next stage of my education for master and doctor courses.
>> I had good grades in my undergraduate studies and smoothly earned my masters and doctors degree. 
My hardships were started after getting Ph.D.
>> My hardships started after earning my Ph.D.
I didn\'t know how difficult getting a favorite job.
>> I didn\'t know how difficult it was to land a dream job.
I applied to many research institutes and universities and I failed a lot.
>> correct
And it\'s ongoing.
>> And currently I am still applying. 
I realized that there is a lot of smarter guys than I or I didn\'t have luck.
>> I realized that there are a lot of smarter guys than I am, or I just don\'t have luck.
When I thought I did my best and so I couldn\'t anything more, all of my energy is exhausted.
>> When I thought I did my best and couldn\'t do anything more, I felt like all of my energy was exhausted. 
It\'s a lot of pain to endure this situation, but I think this is probably the time I\'m given to grow and upgrade myself for a better future.
>> correct 
I\'m learning every moment from these difficulties, and eventually, I\'ll get over them.
>> correct

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