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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: What do you think of intelligence tests? Do you think they are accurate? Why or why not? Each person have different talents, abilities, knowledges and experiences. Futhermore they have their own ground projects, values and commitments. These should not be underestimated to appraise one person. Intelligence tests evaluates people with one criterion, and put people in one line. I think it is not accurate and fair. And I want prepare the speaking class, but the textbook is not announced. So I wrote a self-introduction. could you check it is correct? Have a nice weekend :) I'm majoring in oriental painting, and I take philosophy as double major. I finished the graduation exhibition two years ago. So recently I'm studing to apply the graduated school. And I'm taking some phlosophy classes in summer. Especially I'm interested in moral philosophy, because it guides me to how to live.

Hello there! Thank you for expressing your opinion. I corrected your sentences. I hope I got all your ideas correctly. Anyway, I hope I helped you. Enjoy your weekend! See you! ~T. Jessie~ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:ESSAY: What do you think of intelligence tests? Do you think they are accurate? Why or why not?Each person have different talents, abilities, knowledges and experiences. >> Correct! Futhermore they have their own ground projects, values and commitments. >> Correct! These should not be underestimated to appraise one person. >> Correct! Intelligence tests evaluates people with one criterion, and put people in one line. >> Intelligence tests evaluate people with one criterion, and they put people in one line.I think it is not accurate and fair. >> Correct! And I want prepare the speaking class, but the textbook is not announced. >> And I want to prepare for the speaking class, but the textbook is not yet announced.So I wrote a self-introduction. >> Correct!  could you check it is correct? >> Could you check if it is correct?Have a nice weekend :)>> Correct! I\'m majoring in oriental painting, and I take philosophy as double major. >> I\'m majoring in Oriental Painting and I am also taking Philosophy as my double major.I finished the graduation exhibition two years ago. >> Correct! So recently I\'m studing to apply the graduated school. >> So recently, I\'m studying to apply for graduate school.And I\'m taking some phlosophy classes in summer. >> And I\'m also taking some Philosophy classes this summerEspecially I\'m interested in moral philosophy, because it guides me to how to live. >> I am especially interested with Moral Philosophy because it guides me on how to live.