6/20 homework

2018-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[What is the most exciting thing that’s ever happened to you? Write about your experience and be sure to describe how you felt during and after the event.] I remember my husband's propose day before my wedding. I didn't expect the day before. I just go to the restaurant with my husband. My husband suddenly said his one of friend are near the restaurant. So, he want to meet him shortly and introduce me. I agreed and he took me a hotel lobby. And finally we went to one room. There were so many balloon and propose ring. I was like drama to me. Sometime when we fought, this memory reminds me.

강사 첨삭

That\'s one exciting experience! I can imagine how happy and excited you were that time.

Thanks for sharing that experience to me [이름]!

~Teacher Shanee^^,



[What is the most exciting thing that’s ever happened to you? Write about your experience and be sure to describe how you felt during and after the event.]

I remember my husband\'s propose day before my wedding. 

>>> I remember the day my husband proposed to me.
 I didn\'t expect the day before. 

>>> I didn\'t expect that moment.
 I just go to the restaurant with my husband. 

>>> I just went to the restaurant with him.
 My husband suddenly said his one of friend are near the restaurant. 

>>> My husband suddenly said one of his friends is near the restaurant.
 So, he want to meet him shortly and introduce me. 

>>> So, he wanted to meet him shortly and introduce me to him.
 I agreed and he took me a hotel lobby. 

>>> Correct!
 And finally we went to one room. 

>>> Correct!
 There were so many balloon and propose ring.

>>> There were so many balloons and  there was his proposal ring.
 I was like drama to me. 

>>> It was like a drama to me.
 Sometime when we fought, this memory reminds me.

>>> Sometimes when we fight, I remember that moment.

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