6/20 homework
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That\'s one exciting experience! I can imagine how happy and excited you were that time.
Thanks for sharing that experience to me [이름]!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
[What is the most exciting thing that’s ever happened to you? Write about your experience and be sure to describe how you felt during and after the event.]
I remember my husband\'s propose day before my wedding.
>>> I remember the day my husband proposed to me.
I didn\'t expect the day before.
>>> I didn\'t expect that moment.
I just go to the restaurant with my husband.
>>> I just went to the restaurant with him.
My husband suddenly said his one of friend are near the restaurant.
>>> My husband suddenly said one of his friends is near the restaurant.
So, he want to meet him shortly and introduce me.
>>> So, he wanted to meet him shortly and introduce me to him.
I agreed and he took me a hotel lobby.
>>> Correct!
And finally we went to one room.
>>> Correct!
There were so many balloon and propose ring.
>>> There were so many balloons and there was his proposal ring.
I was like drama to me.
>>> It was like a drama to me.
Sometime when we fought, this memory reminds me.
>>> Sometimes when we fight, I remember that moment.
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