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In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> What is your most memorable vacation? Tell me as much detail as you can.
My most memoerable vacation so far is when i went to Czech in Eastern Europe last summer vacation.
>> My most memorable vacation so far is when i went to the Czech Republic in Eastern Europe last summer vacation.
I was excited beacause Europe visit was for a first time.
>> I was excited because it was my first visit in Europe.
I traveled for 6 days with my friend. It was a long distance flight.
>> >> correct
We vistited two cities, Prague which is capital city and Cesky Krumlov which is countryside of Czech.
>> We visited two cities, Prague, which is the capital city and Cesky Krumlov, which is a countryside of Czech.
It was such a momorable travel i ever had.
>> It was such memorable trip.
We strolled a Charles Bridge and toured castles, churches and historical tourist attractions and so on.
>> We strolled along Charles Bridge and toured castles, churches, historical tourist attractions, and so on.
Most of all, night view on Charles Bridge was spectacular i ever had seen.
>> Most of all, the night view on Charles Bridge was the most spectacular scenery I\'ve ever seen.
Especially, the local food suited my taste well that\'s why i could enjoy the delectable meals.
>> The local food in particular suited my taste well that\'s why I could enjoy the delectable meals.
Traveling in Czech got to be the most touched and unforgettable memory in my life.
>> Traveling to the Czech Republic got to be the most touching and unforgettable memory in my life.
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