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2019-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below: >> What is your most memorable vacation? Tell me as much detail as you can. My most memoerable vacation so far is when i went to Czech in Eastern Europe last summer vacation. I was excited beacause Europe visit was for a first time. I traveled for 6 days with my friend. It was a long distance flight. We vistited two cities, Prague which is capital city and Cesky Krumlov which is countryside of Czech. It was such a momorable travel i ever had. We strolled a Charles Bridge and toured castles, churches and historical tourist attractions and so on. Most of all, night view on Charles Bridge was spectacular i ever had seen. Especially, the local food suited my taste well that\'s why i could enjoy the delectable meals. Traveling in Czech got to be the most touched and unforgettable memory in my life.

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Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework. 


 


Cheers!

Jean


In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:

>> What is your most memorable vacation? Tell me as much detail as you can. 


My most memoerable vacation so far is when i went to Czech in Eastern Europe last summer vacation. 

>> My most memorable vacation so far is when i went to the Czech Republic in Eastern Europe last summer vacation. 


I was excited beacause Europe visit was for a first time. 

>> I was excited because it was my first visit in Europe. 



I traveled for 6 days with my friend. It was a long distance flight.

>> >> correct


We vistited two cities, Prague which is capital city and Cesky Krumlov which is countryside of Czech. 

>> We visited two cities, Prague, which is the capital city and Cesky Krumlov, which is a countryside of Czech. 


It was such a momorable travel i ever had. 

>> It was such memorable trip. 


We strolled a Charles Bridge and toured castles, churches and historical tourist attractions and so on. 

>> We strolled along Charles Bridge and toured castles, churches, historical tourist attractions, and so on. 


Most of all, night view on Charles Bridge was spectacular i ever had seen.

>> Most of all, the night view on Charles Bridge was the most spectacular scenery I\'ve ever seen.


Especially, the local food suited my taste well that\'s why i could enjoy the delectable meals. 

>> The local food in particular suited my taste well that\'s why I could enjoy the delectable meals. 


Traveling in Czech got to be the most touched and unforgettable memory in my life.

>> Traveling to the Czech Republic got to be the most touching and unforgettable memory in my life.

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