6-21th Homework

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T. Anne^^

I have a hope when the day come to us that all Korean can go north and south freely.

>>I have a hope that one day all Koreans can go to the north and south freely.
 Now, South Korean live in the peninsular separately.

>>Right now, South and North Koreans live separately.
 If we want to go to other countries in Asia, we have to use an airplane or a ship.

>>CORRECT!
 But there is another way, which is a train.

>>But there is another way, we can also use the train.
 North Korea doesn\'t admit to use the train when we want to go anywhere.

>>North Korea doesn\'t want that we use the train in going anywhere.
 It is the most close country in the world.

>>It is the most closed country in the world.
 Anyway, if the trail is opened, I would like to go Europe using the train.

>>Anyway, if the trail will be opened I would like to go to Europe using the train.
 Actually, we can use the Russia Continental Train whenever we want to use it.

 >>Actually, we can use the Russia Continental Train whenever we want.

But we have to go to Brindivostock on the airplane, which is very annoying.

>>But we have to go to the place where the airplane is which is very annoying for us.
 If we can use the trail on North Korea, the way going to Europe would become simple and take a low price.

>> If we can use the trail in North Korea, the way going to Europe would become simple and it would be at a lower price.

Until now, it has been just a dream.

>>Until now, it\'s still a dream.

Indeed, two Korea always fight each other, and other countries has used it for their countries\' profit.

>>The two countries are always fighting with each other, and the other countries used this for their own benefit.

They intend to talk a peace but they actually don\'t want to come true the peach in the Korea peninsular.

>>They intend to talk about peace but they don\'t actually want to come to Korea to do it.

Now, we have to seriously consider it.

>>CORRECT!