6.22 H.W !

2018-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

학생이 쓴 원문

What is your worst nightmare? When i was child, my nightmare is usually about my parents. The most frightening nightmare for me is that one of my my parents died. Fortunately, In Korea, such a dream is used to interpretation as a dream of long life of parents. But i always cried and woke up from my dream. These days, my nightmare are various. For example, my nightmare is to fight with my best friends or work in a former job or be scolded by my former boss. First i\'m sorry i missed my last class. It\'s very hard to get up early in the morning too. But i\'ll keep trying!! And i heard you are not feeling well.. I hope you get well!! The health is the best after all!

강사 첨삭

Hello, Lyn! Don\'t worry about it, I understand your situation. Waking up early is never easy! Even I, sometimes, have a hard time waking up early. I was very sick last week, but the good news is that I\'m feeling a lot better now! Thank you for understanding and I must say, I already miss talking to you. See you later! ~ Teacher Elisha 

What is your worst nightmare? 

=>When i was child, my nightmare is usually about my parents.

>> CORRECT!

OR:

>> When I was child, my nightmares are usually about my parents.
 The most frightening nightmare for me is that one of my my parents died.

>>  The most frightening nightmare for me was when one of my parents had died.
 Fortunately, In Korea, such a dream is used to interpretation as a dream of long life of parents.

>>  Fortunately, in Korea, such dreams are used to interpret the long life of one\'s parents.
 But i always cried and woke up from my dream.

>> But, I always wake up and cry because of my nightmare.
 These days, my nightmare are various.

>> These days, my nightmares vary.
 For example, my nightmare is to fight with my best friends or work in a former job or be scolded by my former boss.

>> For example, in my nightmare, I would dream about fighting with my best friend or I would dream about working at my former job or be scolded by my former boss.

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