6/22 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I try to act confidently during my presentation and act politely in Q&A time.
When I present for my research, I think that I\'m best person and I only know well about the research performance.
Otherwise, I can\'t elaborate on my performance because I feel small.
The interviewers have a longer and deeper career than me.
But most academic researches concentrate on the very small part, so even if the research field is similar in a macroscopic point of view, the detail field is absolutely different in a microscopic point of view.
After finish my presentation, they ask questions about my research or something other than research.
Many professors are authoritative and someones think they are the best.
Besides, they ask questions based on their knowledge.
So, I think that it\'s better to firstly admit their knowledge and understanding and then add my private opinion or thoughts.
I want to avoid that they think I\'m rude since Korea has a strict culture between young and old people.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I guess it is different for each interview. There are some interviews in which a combination of the three is necessary, and there are some in which only one is needed. Perhaps, it\'s up to you what you demonstrate during the interview. Anyway, good luck on your next schedule. ^^
-Rachel
I try to act confidently during my presentation and act politely in Q&A time.
>>correct
When I present for my research, I think that I\'m best person and I only know well about the research performance.
When I present for my research, I think that I\'m best person and I only know well about the research performance.
>> When I present my research, I think I\'m the best person who only knows well about my research.
Otherwise, I can\'t elaborate on my performance because I feel small.
Otherwise, I can\'t elaborate on my performance because I feel small.
>> correct
The interviewers have a longer and deeper career than me.
The interviewers have a longer and deeper career than me.
>> The interviewers have a long and deeper career experience than me.
But most academic researches concentrate on the very small part, so even if the research field is similar in a macroscopic point of view, the detail field is absolutely different in a microscopic point of view.
But most academic researches concentrate on the very small part, so even if the research field is similar in a macroscopic point of view, the detail field is absolutely different in a microscopic point of view.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
After finish my presentation, they ask questions about my research or something other than research.
After finish my presentation, they ask questions about my research or something other than research.
>> After finishing my presentation, they ask questions about my research or something other than research work.
Many professors are authoritative and someone thinks they are the best.
Many professors are authoritative and someone thinks they are the best.
>> correct
Besides, they ask questions based on their knowledge.
Besides, they ask questions based on their knowledge.
>> correct
So, I think that it\'s better to firstly admit their knowledge and understanding and then add my private opinion or thoughts.
So, I think that it\'s better to firstly admit their knowledge and understanding and then add my private opinion or thoughts.
>> So I think that it\'s better to acknowledge their mastery and understanding of their own field and then add my private opinions.
I want to avoid that they think I\'m rude since Korea has a strict culture between young and old people.
I want to avoid that they think I\'m rude since Korea has a strict culture between young and old people.
>> I want to avoid the fact that they think I\'m rude because Korea has a strict culture between the young and the old.
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