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2017-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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In no less than 5 sentences, answer the following question: How will you describe the Earth after 20 years from now? <My answer> I imagine the Earth after 20 years from now. There will develop technology. People could live longer than now. Cars can be flying. Buildings will be high. There will develop industry.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^

Great afternoon :)


These things are not impossible too happen.

You will be a beautiful lady by then. :)

Comparing to what we have now, we will expect more

development in the next coming years.

And we hope that it will be for the benefit of all.


Se you^^


Teacher Glenda


In no less than 5 sentences, answer the following question:
How will you describe the Earth after 20 years from now?

< My answer>
I imagine the Earth after 20 years from now.

>> If I imagine the earth 20 years from now.


 There will develop technology.

>> There will be more developed technology.


 People could live longer than now. 

>> People can live longer comparing to the present.


 Cars can be flying.

>> Cars can fly.


 Buildings will be high.

>> Buildings will be higher.


 There will develop industry.

>> There will be more developed industry.

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