6/22 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]^^
Great afternoon :)
These things are not impossible too happen.
You will be a beautiful lady by then. :)
Comparing to what we have now, we will expect more
development in the next coming years.
And we hope that it will be for the benefit of all.
Se you^^
Teacher Glenda
In no less than 5 sentences, answer the following question:
How will you describe the Earth after 20 years from now?
< My answer>
I imagine the Earth after 20 years from now.
>> If I imagine the earth 20 years from now.
There will develop technology.
>> There will be more developed technology.
People could live longer than now.
>> People can live longer comparing to the present.
Cars can be flying.
>> Cars can fly.
Buildings will be high.
>> Buildings will be higher.
There will develop industry.
>> There will be more developed industry.
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