6. 22 Homework

2018-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

What's the most beautiful piece/creation you have ever seen? I like to go to art gallary. Of course I don't have money for buying peices but I just like to see them. The most beautiful piece I ever seen was MaryKim's pieces. At first, I thought It's just about pretty girls but MaryKim said that she wants to tell the problem of lookism. After knowing the meaning, I became to like her pieces.

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- Blair

I like to go to art gallary. Of course I don\'t have money for buying peices but I just like to see them. The most beautiful piece I ever seen was MaryKim\'s pieces. At first, I thought It\'s just about pretty girls but MaryKim said that she wants to tell the problem of lookism. After knowing the meaning, I became to like her pieces.

I like to go to the art gallery, of course, I don\'t have money to buy pieces but I just like to see them. The most beautiful piece I have ever seen was Mary Kim\'s creations. At first I thought it\'s just about pretty women, but Mary Kim said she wants to voice out the problems of Look-ism. After knowing the meaning behind it, I became her fan. / I became to like her pieces.

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