6-22th Homework

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Thank you for doing your homework. Please check the corrections.

Just relax and enjoy your day at work.

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T. Anne^^

What do you think about enjoying your life right now?

>>Are you enjoying your life right now?
The life span of human is short, and I felt it nowadays.

>>The life span of human is short, and I\'m feeling it nowadays.
Many people want to conveniently live for their life so that they are working hard to get the money.

>>Many people want to conveniently live for the rest of their lives so they are working hard to earn more money.
However, it is not easy that we get a lot of money.

>>However, it is not easy for us to earn a lot of money.
While we get some money, we have to pay for our convenient life.

>>While we are working to earn more money, we also have to pay for the things that will make our lives convenient.
So, after paying the money, there is finally no money in out pocket.

>>So after paying for these things, there will be no money left in our pockets.
If we can save or get a lot of money at the end of the month, we would not worry about the saving and our life.

>>If we can save lots of money at the end of the month, we will not be worried about our savings and our lives.
Anyway, we have to earn money and finally we become a slave of the money.

>>Anyway, we have to earn money and until now we are still slaves to money.
Even if someone has a lot of money, one\'s greedy for the money would not be able to stop.

>>Even if someone has a lot of money, one\'s greediness for money can\'t be stopped.
For example, a former Korea President has a greedy for the money, and he finally seems to be arrested tomorrow.

>>For example, a former Korean President was greedy for money, so he will be arrested tomorrow.
He has enough money so that he can not spend until he die.

>>He wanted to have lots of money so that he will have enough money until he dies.
But there was no end in his greedy for the money.

>>But he became more and more greedy for money.
He has denied his allegation for some bribes even though there is concrete evidence.

>>He has denied the allegations for some bribes even if there is a concrete evidence that he did it.