6/23 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I maximize my time for my future.
To do that, I try to keep a daily schedule.
2. I know the speedy manner of cooking.
that is to prepare the ingredient in advance.
3. I moved from one place to another last year.
Now I live in southe area in Daegu.
강사 첨삭
It\'s another good work, [이름]! Keep practicing until everything becomes a lot better. See you later!-Faith-
1. I maximize my time for my future.>> CORRECT
OR I value my time for my future.
To do that, I try to keep a daily schedule.
>> CORRECT
To do that, I try to keep a daily schedule.
>> CORRECT
OR Thus, I try to keep my planner.
2. I know the speedy manner of cooking.
2. I know the speedy manner of cooking.
>> CORRECT
OR I know the quick method of cooking.
that is to prepare the ingredient in advance.
that is to prepare the ingredient in advance.
>> That is to prepare the ingredients in advance.
3. I moved from one place to another last year.
3. I moved from one place to another last year.
>> CORRECT
Now I live in southe area in Daegu.
Now I live in southe area in Daegu.
>> Now, I live in the southern area of Daegu.
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