6.23 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
How'd you foresee yourself in 10 years?
Would you consider yourself still successful?
To be honest, this question is so hard to answer because I am already an old guy. I think that I will become a good grandfather in 10 years. I don't like to become a grandfather. I am still working for a good company in Korea. It's my pleasure and success to work until now. I think I am a lucky guy. Generally, when do people retire in the Philippines? This is what I wanted to ask you at the end of our class this morning.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, MR. [이름]!
Thank you for answering ny question even if it\'s difficult for you. I think that you will become a very cool grandfather someday. kkk. Anyway, with regards to your question, here in the Philippines, the average age of retirement is sixty years old. How about in your company? At what age can you submit your application for retirement? Let\'s talk about it in the class tomorrow. Have a nice day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.How\'d you foresee yourself in 10 years? Would you consider yourself still successful?To be honest, this question is so hard to answer because I am already an old guy.
>> Correct.
I think that I will become a good grandfather in 10 years.
>> Correct.
I don\'t like to become a grandfather.
>> Correct.
I am still working for a good company in Korea.
>> Correct.
It\'s my pleasure and success to work until now.
>> It\'s my pleasure and success to be working until now.
I think I am a lucky guy.
>> Correct.
Generally, when do people retire in the Philippines?
>> Correct.
This is what I wanted to ask you at the end of our class this morning.>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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