6-23th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Whenever we travel a strange place that we never get there, we would see something that we are interested.
We live in the eastern Asia where the people live in with similar life style.
When we take a trip on Europe, we might be interested in the place.
In my case, the roof style of houses in Europe was very interesting for me.
Very normal houses are in our surroundings so that I cannot feel the freshness for it.
It's because I see it everyday.
Recently, I changed the screen wallpaper in my computer into the picture of Europe's house.
The picture was taken by me 4 years ago, at that time I traveled Europe with my family.
The interesting point for me was the color of the roof that was orange.
In the game relating with Rome, the color of the house's roof in the game was orange.
So, I seemed to be in Rome and I was very excited.
But when I traveled in Korea, I already am familiar with somethings.
So, I could not be excited even if it is very new and strange.
But I will take a trip again.
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>>Whenever we travel to a strange place that we\'ve never been before, we would always see something which interests us.
We live in the eastern Asia where the people live in with similar life style.
We live in the eastern Asia where the people live in with similar life style.
>>We live in the eastern part of Asia where we people have similar life styles.
When we take a trip on Europe, we might be interested in the place.
When we take a trip on Europe, we might be interested in the place.
>>If we take a trip to Europe, we might be interested in the place.
In my case, the roof style of houses in Europe was very interesting for me.
In my case, the roof style of houses in Europe was very interesting for me.
>>The roof styles of the houses in Europe are very interesting to me.
Very normal houses are in our surroundings so that I cannot feel the freshness for it.
Very normal houses are in our surroundings so that I cannot feel the freshness for it.
>>Normal style of houses is common in our country.
It\'s because I see it every day.
It\'s because I see it every day.
>>CORRECT!
Recently, I changed the screen wallpaper in my computer into the picture of Europe\'s house.
Recently, I changed the screen wallpaper in my computer into the picture of Europe\'s house.
>>Recently, I changed the wallpaper of my computer into a picture of a house in Europe.
The picture was taken by me 4 years ago, at that time I traveled Europe with my family.
The picture was taken by me 4 years ago, at that time I traveled Europe with my family.
>>The picture was taken by me 4 years ago when I traveled to Europe with my family.
The interesting point for me was the color of the roof that was orange.
The interesting point for me was the color of the roof that was orange.
>>It was very interesting for me when I saw that the color of the roof was orange.
In the game relating with Rome, the color of the house\'s roof in the game was orange.
In the game relating with Rome, the color of the house\'s roof in the game was orange.
>>In the game about Rome, the color of the house\'s roof was orange.
So, I seemed to be in Rome and I was very excited.
So, I seemed to be in Rome and I was very excited.
>>Whenever I see the wallpaper, I feel like I\'m in Rome.
But when I traveled in Korea, I already am familiar with somethings.
>>But when I came back here in Korea, I am already familiar with some things.
So, I could not be excited even if it is very new and strange.
So, I could not be excited even if it is very new and strange.
>> So I don\'t feel very excited even if the style of the house is new.
But I will take a trip again.
But I will take a trip again.
>>But I\'d like to go on a trip again.
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