6.24 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, my best birthday was two years ago. Exactly when i came back to korea from England. At that moment i was really happt to see my parents, so the birthday also was really good and happy :)
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for sending in this one ;)The best birthday celebration is the one where we get to celebrate with our loved ones.
See you in class!
~Teacher Becca~
Here are some corrections:
Well, my best birthday was two years ago.
>> correct!
>> OR: I had my best birthday two years ago.
Exactly when i came back to korea from England.
>> Exactly when I came back to Korea from England.
At that moment i was really happt to see my parents, so the birthday also was really good and happy :)
>> At that moment, I was really happy to see my parents, so my birthday was really good and happy :)
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