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2014-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Becca

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Well, my best birthday was two years ago. Exactly when i came back to korea from England. At that moment i was really happt to see my parents, so the birthday also was really good and happy :)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Thanks for sending in this one ;)The best birthday celebration is the one where we get to celebrate with our loved ones. See you in class!   ~Teacher Becca~   Here are some corrections:   Well, my best birthday was two years ago. >> correct! >> OR: I had my best birthday two years ago. Exactly when i came back to korea from England. >>  Exactly when I came back to Korea from England. At that moment i was really happt to see my parents, so the birthday also was really good and happy :) >>  At that moment, I was really happy to see my parents, so my birthday was really good and happy :)

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