6-24th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many flowers that blossom in the spring.
The spring is a flower season since we can see a lot of flowers in the yard.
The temperature in the spring increased slowly, as result that the flowers would blossom in order.
However, in affect of the temperature change the order of blossoming flowers was also changed.
In the yard of my office, there are several tree that blossom their flowers in the spring.
Nowadays, the weather suddenly became warm and the flowers blossomed at once.
I wanted to see the flowers followed by time but they came to me at once.
Especially, the flowers when blossom in the spring can not last for a long time.
So, if we don't take a caution, the flowers would not wait for us.
Every spring to see the spring flowers that have a lot of colors is a big pleasure to me.
Nowadays there is no waiting time for seeing the spring flowers in order.
Anyway, I can see a lot of flowers in surroundings.
Before the flowers drop, I will take a picture with myself.
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>>There are many flowers that blossomed because it\'s spring already.
The spring is a flower season since we can see a lot of flowers in the yard.
The spring is a flower season since we can see a lot of flowers in the yard.
>>Spring is the season of flowers since we can see a lot of flowers in the yard.
The temperature in the spring increased slowly, as result that the flowers would blossom in order.
The temperature in the spring increased slowly, as result that the flowers would blossom in order.
>>The temperature in spring is slowly increasing,as a result the flowers would blossom in order.
However, in affect of the temperature change the order of blossoming flowers was also changed.
However, in affect of the temperature change the order of blossoming flowers was also changed.
>>However, because the temperature varies from time to time the order of the flowers when they blossom has changed as well.
In the yard of my office, there are several tree that blossom their flowers in the spring.
>>In the yard of my office,there are several trees that bloom in spring.
Nowadays, the weather suddenly became warm and the flowers blossomed at once.
Nowadays, the weather suddenly became warm and the flowers blossomed at once.
>>CORRECT!
I wanted to see the flowers followed by time but they came to me at once.
I wanted to see the flowers followed by time but they came to me at once.
>>I wanted to see the flowers bloom little by little but they bloomed all at once.
Especially, the flowers when blossom in the spring can not last for a long time.
Especially, the flowers when blossom in the spring can not last for a long time.
>>When the flowers bloom in spring, they don\'t usually last for a long time.
So, if we don\'t take a caution, the flowers would not wait for us.
So, if we don\'t take a caution, the flowers would not wait for us.
>>So if we\'re not cautious, we\'ll not be able to see the flowers bloom.
Every spring to see the spring flowers that have a lot of colors is a big pleasure to me.
Every spring to see the spring flowers that have a lot of colors is a big pleasure to me.
>>Every spring, seeing the flowers bloom with different colors is a big pleasure for me.
Nowadays there is no waiting time for seeing the spring flowers in order.
Nowadays there is no waiting time for seeing the spring flowers in order.
>>Nowadays,you don\'t have to wait for a long time to see the beautiful flowers.
Anyway, I can see a lot of flowers in surroundings.
Anyway, I can see a lot of flowers in surroundings.
>>Anyway, I can see a lot of flowers in my surroundings.
Before the flowers drop, I will take a picture with myself.
Before the flowers drop, I will take a picture with myself.
>>Before the flowers will fall from the trees, I will take a picture of myself and use the trees as my background.
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