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What\'s your opinion on distant learning for students?
Distant learning has its pros and cons. Distant learning is necessary in times like today when Coronavirus is stopping us from going outside. It also has the advantage of being able to listen again as long as it is recorded. However, I don\'t like distance learning very much. I find it hard to focus on. Students pay attention by looking at the teacher\'s eyes. When I did distance learning, I slept while listening to the class. Distant learning also makes it hard to communicate with friends. We go to school to associate with other friends and learn the values of being a part of society. We learn how to acknowledge difference, we learn how to be respectful of others and be responsible for our actions. It is impossible to learn those values from distant learning. Thus I am not in favor of distant learning.
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Hi [이름]. Awesome work. :)
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What\'s your opinion on distant learning for students?
>> Correct.
Distant learning has its pros and cons.
Distant learning has its pros and cons.
>> Correct.
Distant learning is necessary in times like today when Coronavirus is stopping us from going outside.
>> Distant learning is necessary in times like this because of corona virus.
It also has the advantage of being able to listen again as long as it is recorded.
>> It also has the advantage of being able to listen again because it\'s a recorded class.
However, I don\'t like distance learning very much. I find it hard to focus on.
>> However, I don\'t like distance learning very much because I find it hard to focus.
Students pay attention by looking at the teacher\'s eyes.
>> Correct.
When I did distance learning, I slept while listening to the class.
>> When we did distance learning I slept while in class.
Distant learning also makes it hard to communicate with friends.
>> Correct.
We go to school to associate with other friends and learn the values of being a part of society.
>> Correct.
We learn how to acknowledge difference, we learn how to be respectful of others and be responsible for our actions.
>> We learn how to acknowledge differences, we learn how to be respectful of others and to be responsible for our actions.
It is impossible to learn those values from distant learning.
>> It is impossible to learn those values through distant learning.
Thus I am not in favor of distant learning.
>> Correct.
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