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Why do you love Mathematics?
My love for Mathematics is same as my love for social studies. The reason I love them is the opposite. I love mathematics because it has an exact answer. I love how my thoughts flow when solving mathematical problems. It is also thrilling when I get the answer at the end of logic. However, I love social studies because it has many problems that don\'t have an answer. Social studies show how everyone thinks differently. What I thought something ought to be might not be the same for other people. I love hearing other people\'s opinions and thinking about it. I believe it makes me think deeper and firmer.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for doing your homework.
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My love for Mathematics is same as my love for social studies.
>> Correct.
The reason I love them is the opposite.
>> The reason why I love them both is totally different.
I love mathematics because it has an exact answer.
>> Correct.
I love how my thoughts flow when solving mathematical problems.
>> Correct.
It is also thrilling when I get the answer at the end of logic.
>> Correct.
However, I love social studies because it has many problems that don\'t have an answer.
>> However, I love social studies because it has many problems that have no definite answer.
Social studies show how everyone thinks differently.
>> Correct.
What I thought something ought to be might not be the same for other people.
>> My thoughts on something might not be same for other people.
I love hearing other people\'s opinions and thinking about it.
>> I love hearing other people\'s opinions and think about it.
I believe it makes me think deeper and firmer.
>> I believe it makes me think deeper and firmer.
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