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1. great experience
2. got to enjoy a stroll
3. waste of time
4. catching up
5. foreign land
1. I will go to Jeju Island this weekend. We are going to travel around Jeju and while i stay here, I \'ll catch up my parents. It will be a great experience.
2. My area is close to the beach. So, when i feel down or need to relieve stress, I used to got to enjoy a stroll at beachside streets.
3. Because I don\'t want to waste of time, on my way out I took the recyclables and garbeges out at a dumpster.
4. After I have done catching up, we headed to the cafe in order to talk what\'s going on each other grabbing some coffees.
5. I dream of living in foreign land because It is the main reason why I study English and I want to raise my kids in wide and huge world which can learn various cultures and meet various races. I always feel that I am sorry that I have raised in one country, just korea.
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1. great experience
2. got to enjoy a stroll
3. waste of time
4. catching up
5. foreign land
1. I will go to Jeju Island this weekend. We are going to travel around Jeju and while i stay here, I \'ll catch up my parents. It will be a great experience.
>> >> I will go to Jeju this weekend. We are going to travel around the island and during our stay, I \'ll catch up with my parents. It will be a great experience.
2. My area is close to the beach. So, when i feel down or need to relieve stress, I used to got to enjoy a stroll at beachside streets.
>> >> My area is close to the beach so when I feel down or need to relieve my stress, I used to get to enjoy a stroll at the beachside streets.
3. Because I don\'t want to waste of time, on my way out I took the recyclables and garbeges out at a dumpster.
>> >> Since I didn\'t want to waste my time, on my way out, I took the recyclables and garbage to the the dumpster.
4. After I have done catching up, we headed to the cafe in order to talk what\'s going on each other grabbing some coffees.
>> >> After we were done catching up, we headed to the cafe in order to continue chatting.
5. I dream of living in foreign land because It is the main reason why I study English and I want to raise my kids in wide and huge world which can learn various cultures and meet various races. I always feel that I am sorry that I have raised in one country, just korea.
>> >> The main reason why I study English is because I dream of living in a foreign land and raise my kids in a wide and huge world where I can learn various cultures and meet different races. I always feel bad that I was raised in a single country - and that is Korea.
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