6-25th Homework
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Today is a fine and warm Saturday that is good to ride a bicycle.
Last night, I went to the bed lately. In the early this morning, I had an exercise.
To avoid the monday disease, I think we have to get a normal routine as like a week.
Nevertheless, in the spring we can easily sleep after having a lunch.
According to the report, if you could not escape from the sleep in the afternoon, you should take a nap for a while.
And the efficient behavior that you can do best is to take a nap and drink a cup of coffee before taking a nap.
In the report, there are a little amount of caffeine in the coffee and it makes sensitive the brain.
But the caffeine in the coffee makes the effect in 1 or 2 hours after drinking the coffee.
So, the report recommends that you should drink a cup of coffee early 1 or 2 hours taking a nap.
If so, after waking up the caffeine of the coffee is effectively applied to the brain and the fatigue can be also removed.
I stopped drinking it to sleep well in the night.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It\'s the month of April!
Let\'s pray that this month would be good to both of us!^^
T. Anne^^
>>Today is a fine and warm Saturday and it\'s a good day to ride a bicycle.
Last night, I went to the bed lately.
>>Last night, I went to bed late.
In the early this morning, I had an exercise.
>>I had an exercise early this morning.
To avoid the monday disease, I think we have to get a normal routine as like a week.
>>To avoid the Monday sickness, I think we need to have a regular routine in a week.
Nevertheless, in the spring we can easily sleep after having a lunch.
Nevertheless, in the spring we can easily sleep after having a lunch.
>>In spring we can easily fall asleep after having our lunch.
According to the report, if you could not escape from the sleep in the afternoon, you should take a nap for a while.
According to the report, if you could not escape from the sleep in the afternoon, you should take a nap for a while.
>>According to the report,if you could not escape from sleeping in the afternoon, you should take a nap for a while.
And the efficient behavior that you can do best is to take a nap and drink a cup of coffee before taking a nap.
And the efficient behavior that you can do best is to take a nap and drink a cup of coffee before taking a nap.
>>CORRECT!
In the report, there are a little amount of caffeine in the coffee and it makes sensitive the brain.
In the report, there are a little amount of caffeine in the coffee and it makes sensitive the brain.
>>As mentioned in the report, there is a little amount of caffeine in the coffee and it increases the sensitivity of the brain.
But the caffeine in the coffee makes the effect in 1 or 2 hours after drinking the coffee.
But the caffeine in the coffee makes the effect in 1 or 2 hours after drinking the coffee.
>>The caffeine takes effect in one or two hours after drinking the coffee.
So, the report recommends that you should drink a cup of coffee early 1 or 2 hours taking a nap.
So, the report recommends that you should drink a cup of coffee early 1 or 2 hours taking a nap.
>>So the report recommends that you should drink a cup of coffee 1 or 2 hours before taking a nap.
If so, after waking up the caffeine of the coffee is effectively applied to the brain and the fatigue can be also removed.
If so, after waking up the caffeine of the coffee is effectively applied to the brain and the fatigue can be also removed.
>>If so, after waking up the caffeine in the coffee has been effectively absorbed by the brain and it can remove the fatigue that you feel.
I stopped drinking it to sleep well in the night.
I stopped drinking it to sleep well in the night.
>>I stopped drinking coffee so that I can sleep well at night.
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