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2014-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

학생이 쓴 원문

Could you check these sentences, if they are correct? 1. During childhood, Korean children hear folktales from grandparents, television or text books. Adults often teach moral ethics with folktales, so children learn, memorize and enjoy the stories. 2. I think the 'Dan-Koon' myth is the oldest folktales in Korea. I like 'Jangwha Honglyeon', 'Kong-gee Pot-gee' and 'Ms.Park' stories. because similar age of women with me are protagonistes in the stories, so I sympathize more than others. 3. Another common theme of Korean folktales is 'a woman's grudge'. In some of stories, a man or situations persecutes a woman, and she is thrown out the house or killed by them. In the 'thrown out' stories, usually a woman bears a grudge, then she success in her life. In the 'be killed' stories, a woman revenges horribly.

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for trusting me with this. I do hope that I got your ideas correctly. ^^, Anyway, I think this is a very good topic. I hope you can share a story to me tomorrow. See you! ~T. Jessie~ Could you check these sentences if they are correct?>> Correct!1. During childhood, Korean children hear folktales from grandparents, television or text books. >> During childhood, Korean children hear folktales from their grandparents, television or text books. Adults often teach moral ethics with folktales, so children learn, memorize and enjoy the stories.>> Adults often teach moral ethics through folktales so children may learn, memorize and enjoy the stories.2. I think the \'Dan-Koon\' myth is the oldest folktales in Korea. >> I think  \'Dan-Koon\' myth is the oldest folktale in Korea. I like \'Jangwha Honglyeon\', \'Kong-gee Pot-gee\' and \'Ms.Park\' stories. because similar age of women with me are protagonistes in the stories, so I sympathize more than others.>> I like \'Jangwha Honglyeon\', \'Kong-gee Pot-gee\' and \'Ms.Park\' stories because women who are of my age are protagonists in the stories, so I sympathize them more than others.3. Another common theme of Korean folktales is \'a woman\'s grudge\'. >> Correct!In some of stories, a man or situations persecutes a woman, and she is thrown out the house or killed by them. >> In some stories, a man or a situation persecutes a woman, and she is thrown out of the house or killed by them. In the \'thrown out\' stories, usually a woman bears a grudge, then she success in her life. >> In the stories where the woman was thrown out, the woman usually bears grudges but then she becomes successful. In the \'be killed\' stories, a woman revenges horribly. >> In the stories where the woman are killed, the woman usually revenges horribly.

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