6-26th Homework

2018-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

Every night I have a dream even though I could not remember it. Whenever I had a dream in the night, I always tired in that morning. To get a sleep well in the night, the best thing that I think is to exercise hard. After becoming Spring, I have got several activities to move my body. I ride a bicycle to commute in the morning even if the air condition is not good. If the fine dust concentration is terrible, I will not ride the bicycle. However, I keep my routine for my health. Another activity is to do a Pilates that is like a Yoga. But the Pilates is not the Yoga even though it came from the Yoga. I have exercise the Pilates for 2 years. At the staring time, there was little a man in a class. Many participants in the class was almost women. I exercise the Pilates after finishing the work and nowadays there are many men more than women. Before starting the Pilates, I thought I must do something to enhance and to keep my health. The Pilates is very good for me and I recommend you, too.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
I hope your weekend went well! 
Stay positive and be thankful always!
Thank you for doing your homework.^^
Talk to you soon!
T. Anne^^

Every night I have a dream even though I could not remember it.

>>Every night, I dream of something but I cannot remember it when I wake up in the morning.
Whenever I had a dream in the night, I always tired in that morning.

>>Whenever I have a dream at night, I always feel tired in the morning.
To get a sleep well in the night, the best thing that I think is to exercise hard.

>>To get a good sleep at night, the best thing that I need to do is to exercise hard.
After becoming Spring, I have got several activities to move my body.

>>Since it\'s spring already, I encourage myself to do lots of activities.
I ride a bicycle to commute in the morning even if the air condition is not good.

>>I ride a bicycle to commute in the morning even if the condition of the air is not good.
If the fine dust concentration is terrible, I will not ride the bicycle.

>>If the road is too dusty, I will not ride the bicycle. 
However, I keep my routine for my health.

>>However, I need to keep my routine so that I\'ll be healthy.
Another activity is to do a Pilates that is like a Yoga.

>>Another activity that I do is the Pilates which is somewhat similar to Yoga.
But the Pilates is not the Yoga even though it came from the Yoga.

>>Pilates was based from Yoga but there is a difference between the two.
I have exercise the Pilates for 2 years.

>>I have done the Pilates for two years now.
At the staring time, there was little a man in a class.

>>When I started doing Pilates, there were only a few men in the class.
Many participants in the class was almost women.

>>Many of the participants in the class were women.
I exercise the Pilates after finishing the work and nowadays there are many men more than women.

>>I do the Pilates after work and nowadays there are many men more than women.
Before starting the Pilates, I thought I must do something to enhance and to keep my health.

>>Before starting the Pilates, I thought that I must do something to enhance and keep my body healthy.
The Pilates is very good for me and I recommend you, too.

>>The Pilates is very good for me and I want to recommend it to you.

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