6. 27 Homework

2018-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having uniforms at work? First advantage can be that we don't need to pick up clothes when we prepares to work. We don't need to worry about pashion. Second advantage can be uniforms make workers look professonal. It can give customers faith. On the other hand, One disadvantage can be hiding workers' personality.

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First advantage can be that we don\'t need to pick up clothes when we prepares to work. We don\'t need to worry about pashion. Second advantage can be uniforms make workers look professonal. It can give customers faith.
On the other hand, One disadvantage can be hiding workers\' personality.

The first advantage of having uniforms at work is we don\'t need to spend more time to choose what to wear. We don\'t need to worry about fashion. Secondly, uniforms can make workers looked professional. It can gain customer\'s trust.

On the other hand, it can hid worker\'s personality.

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