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1. spectacular
2. Thanks to
3. not so long ago
4. worth remembering
5. eye-catching
1. Beachside hotel\'s view was pretty spectacular. I yearn to visit there again.
2. Thanks to police crackdowns, there are few crimes these days. However, despite police crackdowns, there are still druck divers.
3. Not so long ago, i started to have break-outs. I felt like this skincare products weren\'t suitable for me.
4. It is worth remembering as the best amusement park. With colorful surroundings and all the lighting effects, I could feel like i stepped into a fairtale.
5. We need to speak using eye-catching key words in order to communicate with others effectively.
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1. spectacular
2. Thanks to
3. not so long ago
4. worth remembering
5. eye-catching
1. Beachside hotel\'s view was pretty spectacular. I yearn to visit there again.
>> The beachside hotel\'s view was pretty spectacular. I yearn to visit there again.
2. Thanks to police crackdowns, there are few crimes these days. However, despite police crackdowns, there are still druck divers.
>> Thanks to police crackdowns, there are few crimes these days. However, despite police crackdowns, drink driving is still quite common.
3. Not so long ago, i started to have break-outs. I felt like this skincare products weren\'t suitable for me.
>> Not so long ago, I started to have break-outs. I felt like these skincare products weren\'t suitable for me.
4. It is worth remembering as the best amusement park. With colorful surroundings and all the lighting effects, I could feel like i stepped into a fairtale.
>> correct
5. We need to speak using eye-catching key words in order to communicate with others effectively.
>> correct
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