6-27th Homework
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In Korea, the baseball game is very popular and is my favorite thing.
>>In Korea, the baseball game is very popular and it\'s my favorite game.
When I was glowing up, the professional baseball league started to mitigate the antipathy of the government that was founded by the coup.
>>When I was growing up, the professional baseball league started to mitigate the antipathy of the government that was founded by the coup.
Do you know the 3S policy in order to decrease to pay attention about the government?
>>Do you know the 3S policy in Korea which was passed to distract the public from paying too much attention to the government?
That is, sex, sports, and screen.
>>CORRECT!
Anyway, at that time I didn\'t know about that and I just enjoyed the baseball game with my friend after school.
>>Anyway, at that time I didn\'t know about that and I just enjoyed playing baseball with my friend after school.
Specially, we played the game on Saturday and Sunday afternoon.
>>We played the game every Saturday and Sunday afternoon.
When I went to school, I had to get the class on Saturday.
>>When I started going to school, I had to attend classes every Saturday.
After ending the class, we gather several members to compose of two teams.
>>After the class, we gathered several members to make two teams.
After finishing the composition, we enjoyed the game until the sun went down.
>>After that, we enjoyed the game until the sun went down.
On Sunday, we also played the baseball game with another team that was already reserved yesterday.
>>CORRECT!
As enjoying the baseball game, I could not do my homework on time.
>>Because I enjoyed the game, I could not do my homework on time.
When I returned back home, I always get anxious whether I could finish my home work on time or not.
>>When I returned back home, I got anxious because I\'m not sure whether I could finish my home work on time or not.
Anyway, I miss it.
>>I was not able to finish my homework on time.
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