6-28th Homework

2018-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was a young boy, I mistook that I may be a superman who was in the movie. Sometimes, I dreamed that I was flying in the sky in a superman suit. So, I thought that I could go through any problems in my life. I found it was not true in a short time. When we work with someone and to solve a problem, there would be some obstacles that we could not solve. So, we have to choose how to do it at that time. Even if it is very difficult to solve it, we could challenge to overcome the hardship. When we meet the obstacles that is out of range, we might give up one step in order to go forward two steps. That is the problem of the selection. Whatever we select, that is not to give up the whole thing. Backward steps would be a good strategy, sometimes. But we are very normal persons who are nervous in small hard problem. In the writing, I could bravely say about it. But in the real situation, I might easily not select the specific choice. To fast select something, we might need a training.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework again!^

Please check the corrections!

T. Anne^^

When I was a young boy, I mistook that I may be a superman who was in the movie.

>>When I was a young boy, I thought that I could be a superman just like in the movies.
Sometimes, I dreamed that I was flying in the sky in a superman suit.

>>Sometimes I dream that I\'m flying in the sky wearing a superman suit.
So, I thought that I could go through any problems in my life.

>>So, I thought that I could handle any problems in my life.

I found it was not true in a short time.

>>I found out in a short time that it was not true.
When we work with someone and to solve a problem, there would be some obstacles that we could not solve.

>>When we work with someone to solve a problem, there would be some obstacles that we need to go through.
So, we have to choose how to do it at that time.

>>So we have to think on how escape from that obstacle.
Even if it is very difficult to solve it, we would be challenge to overcome the hardship.

>>Even if it is very difficult to solve it, we would be challenged and can overcome the hardship in time.
When we meet the obstacles that is out of range, we might give up one step in order to go forward two steps.

>>When we meet an obstacle that we can\'t solve, we need to step back in order to go two steps forward.
That is the problem of the selection.

>>That is the problem in making decisions.
Whatever we select, that is not to give up the whole thing.

>>Whatever decision we make, we should not give up and try to stick to it.
Backward steps would be a good strategy, sometimes.

>>Taking steps backward would be a good strategy sometimes.
But we are very normal persons who are nervous in small hard problem.

>>We are just normal people who become nervous when we encounter problems.
In the writing, I could bravely say about it.

>>In writing, I could bravely express myself.
But in the real situation, I might easily not select the specific choice.

>>But when I\'m in the real situation, I might not select the perfect choice.
To fast select something, we might need a training.

>>In order for us to select the perfect choice, we need a training on how to do it.

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