6.29 Are we too dependent on computer?

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Thanks for taking the time to answer our essay question.

I agree that people are very much dependent on computers.

I think this has become more evident with the invention of smartphones.

Smartphones are considered as pocket computers nowadays because they can perform most of the functions that portable computers do.

However, we have become so reliant on these machines that we tend to forget to harness our own abilities.

Anyway, that is my opinion about this matter. :)

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In my opinion, we are too dependent on computer in modern society. 

>> In my opinion, we are too dependent on the computer in the modern society. 
As increasing importance of smartphone, it decreases dependence on computer little but computer has still the most important role in our life.

>>  As the smartphone become increasingly important to us, our dependence on computers decreases a little but they still have an important role in our life.
we use computer for searching information that we want to know and working in office.

>> We use a computer to search for information that we want to know and work with it in the office.

we can also predict the weather condition by using super computer in advance.

>> We can also predict the weather condition by using a super computer in advance.

so I think computer gives us many conveniences, However, paradoxically saying, if the computer would be broken or doesn\'t work, we will have very big disadvantage exactly in our life.

>> I think a computer gives us many conveniences. However, paradoxically saying, if the computer is broken or doesn\'t work, we will have a very big disadvantage.