6-2nd Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Are you having a happy Friday?
I am actually considering buying a new smartphone right now.
My phone suddenly got broken yesterday and I don\'t know if I should get it repaired or replace it with a new one.
I am confused. kkk.
Anyhow, I hope you can find a good computer .
See you again on Tuesday.
Have a happy weekend!
~Teacher C[이름] :)
What\'s the main interest when you buy something?
>> [Do you mean]: What\'s the main reason/purpose when you buy something?
Do you importantly consider the design or doesn\'t care about it?
>> Do you importantly consider the design or don\'t care about it?
Whenever I buy the appliance, it often annoy me.
>> Whenever I buy an appliance, it often annoys me.
Through the failure of buying something, I take a hint from it.
>> [Do you mean]: When I fail to buy something, I learn from it.
If you want to use it for a long time, you would seriously consider its price.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If you intend to use it for a long time then you have to seriously consider its price.
Whenever I try to select among a lot of goods, I usually thought the price at first.
>> Whenever I try to select among a lot of goods, I usually think of the price first.
Finally, even though the design of goods was not good, we bought it since the price was lower than others.
>> Finally, even though the design of the goods is not good, we still buy it since the price is lower than the others.
After a short time, we began to be disappointed because of the poor durability.
>> After a short time, we begin to be disappointed because of the poor durability.
I have experienced the poor durability until now.
>> I still experience having an appliance with a poor durability until now.
However, the low price is very attractive when I buy something.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, I easily get enticed with the low price when I buy something.
Through the experience we decide one rule is to buy more expensive goods.
>> Through experience we decided to buy more expensive goods.
The expensive goods have a nice design even.
>> The expensive goods even have a nice design.
Of course, I don\'t buy the most expensive goods that I cannot afford.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Of course, I don\'t buy the very expensive goods which I cannot afford.
However, if it should be to me absolutely, I would buy it.
>> [Do you mean]: However, if it is for my personal use, I would absolutely buy it.
Actually, I need to change the computer in house.
>> Actually, I need to change the computer in my house.
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