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2022-06-06 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS: ~ Writing Task: In 3-5 sentences, please answer the question: What kind of bird do you love the most? Why do you like it? I like eagles, parrots and little birds! Because parrot is smart, eagles are handsome and little birds are buitiful and cute.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

HOMEWORK KEY ANSWERS:
~ Writing Task:
In 3-5 sentences, please answer the question:
What kind of bird do you love the most? Why do you like it?

I like eagles, parrots and little birds!
>> CORRECT!
Because parrot is smart, eagles are handsome and little birds are buitiful and cute.
>>  That\'s because parrots are smart, eagles are handsome, and little birds are beautiful and cute.

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